Ok, so apparently the last line was a little too girly, glittery, and said the word PINK 567 times. Too much. If your stuff fits well and fills a hole in the market, DONT MAKE ME WALK AROUND WITH THE WORDS "VS PINK" ALL OVER MY ASS. Thank you. Here is a sample of the new line. Slim, fierce and very, very "un-pink." I approve. My only other suggestion:

